A few more words

Posted on Monday, March 8th, 2010 in writing Tags: ,

Microfiction Monday

He was caught in an awkward situation. While she stayed, he could hide his feelings; but her proximity only made them more intense…

poolside

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6 Responses to 'A few more words'

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  1. Susan at Stony River said,

    on March 8th, 2010 at 7:09 pm

    Oh dear!
    I wouldn’t mind see the picture of him after she dove in …
    LOL

  2. juliana said,

    on March 8th, 2010 at 8:56 pm

    oohhh… too funny and very clever!

  3. southlakesmom said,

    on March 8th, 2010 at 9:00 pm

    Umm…as my teens would say, “AWK-WARD!”

    Well done!

  4. Peggy said,

    on March 8th, 2010 at 9:08 pm

    This stroy is getting very interesting and Hot!
    Wonder what’s next….hmmmm!
    Good one, and again so different from the rest!

  5. Bill said,

    on March 8th, 2010 at 9:43 pm

    If he fell in the pool behind her he wouldn’t have to worry about the situation.

  6. Sylvia Kirkwood said,

    on March 9th, 2010 at 3:18 am

    I love it! Of course, Bill is right about him falling into the pool! A great one and different! Have a great week!

    Sylvia