Exquisite corpse: giving thanks
Although Thanksgiving in the US isn’t till next Thursday, the last Exquisite Corpse poem in which I took part has been all about giving thanks.
It’s hosted on Champagne Dreams, and it’s called Great is the Morning.
Can you spot my lines without mousing over the links? Hint: they’re a bit long but I couldn’t see any way at the time to shorten them without losing meaning (although now of course I can).







on November 20th, 2008 at 10:44 pm
Yes, long gave it away; but it’s a lovely poem and I like your lines.
Isn’t it true that seeing your own words in print triggers Inner Editor all over again? LOL