NaNoWriMo 2008 #9

Posted on Sunday, November 30th, 2008 in NaNoWriMo Tags: ,

NaNoWriMo 2008 Winner

Well, I already did my ‘Whoo, I did it’ post.

So this one is a ‘Whoo, loads of other people have done it’ post! And lots have, including many who stop by this blog – well done to all of you.

I’m also pretty damn pleased because I managed to keep going rather than having a post-50k slump, and I’m currently at over 67,000 words with another couple of hours’ writing time in which I fully intend to Finish the Damn Novel – I have one and a half scenes left to write, or about another 2,500 words. Which is very doable, and would put me over 70,000.

And then tomorrow I can relax – or rather, go to work, and then go to the Belfast TGIO do.

And on Tuesday… I can start replotting The Secrets of the Library to include the fairly random but very useful things I thought of while driving home the other night, which will greatly enhance the fantasy world it’s set in /and/ my story. Whoot.

Hopefully the amount of smugness in this blog will be toned down again in the next few weeks, and the amount of actual real useful and hopefully interesting posts will increase.

But by gum, I love November more than I can possibly explain.

Edited just before midnight to add: WTF? I wrote over 7,000 words today, which is more than 2,000 more than my best-ever day previously. And I didn’t even need them to win NaNoWriMo with – although I did use them to Finish the Damn Novel. And that in itself was pretty satisfying.
Hmm. I could get another 2 words if I actually wrote ‘The End’…

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Quote of the Day (26/11/08)

Posted on Wednesday, November 26th, 2008 in quote of the day Tags: ,

“You don’t have to suffer to be a poet; adolescence is enough suffering for anyone.”
John Ciardi (US poet, 1916 – 1986)
[Quote supplied by the Quotations Page]

Oh, so true – I wrote some poems I’m very fond of, back in my adolescence. A lot of them were about my own personal suffering; it really is that time of life when you feel everything so very deeply, because very often, you’re feeling that way for the first time.

The pain does wear off in time, and you learn to deal with it, current adolescents may be relieved to know (or may just not believe). Emotions are still felt deeply, but there’s an overlay of ‘this too will pass’. That has actually had an effect on my poetry (never mind the fact that I stopped writing it for a few years). If what I write these days contains any sort of suffering, it tends to be about that of other people rather than my own.

I was contacted recently about one of my poems, which might be considered to be about suffering, or at least about being different in an indifferent world. Someone at an online English tutoring service in Australia has decided they would like to use Alice as a tutorial piece. I did some checking on the service, of course, before I said yes – but really, if someone has read enough into one of my poems to think it will be a good comprehension exercise for high school students, then how can I say no? It’s incredibly flattering!

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NaNoWriMo 2008 #8

Posted on Saturday, November 22nd, 2008 in NaNoWriMo Tags: , ,

Woooooooo HOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

And that, my friends, is the sound of me passing the 50,000 words finish line, which I did at about 4pm today while sat in the Roast Café in Belfast with several other WriMos. I was smug. I admit it.

I think I was owed a bit of smugness though – I have never completed my 50,000 so quickly before, in many years of NaNovelling. Plus, I still have quite a lot of story to go and I am Not Yet Burnt Out.

This last is very important. It means that when I finish this particular novel-length story (probably about 70,000 words, which will take it into December), I can take a brief break to re-redraft The Secrets of the Library, which is the novel I worked on over the summer and really really really really really really want to finish. I need to rewrite the plot outline though, and redo some character sheets, and have a think about the themes and concepts that need to be in there. Plus I need to finish re-typing all the bits I wrote during NaNoWriMo 2003 and afterwards (about 30,000 words in total; I’m half-way through).

I feel very creative and very enthused and very productive at the moment though, and I want to keep driving that feeling on. It would be a shame to waste it.

Good luck to everyone else who’s still going, anyway!

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What I learnt about writing from MOOing

Posted on Friday, November 21st, 2008 in writing Tags: , ,

First off, an explanation – or confession, however you prefer to read it. Between 1995 and 2006, one of my main pastimes was MOOing: taking part in online text-based roleplaying games run on the MOO platform, generally ones based on Anne McCaffrey’s Dragonriders of Pern series.

Ever heard of Multi-User Dungeons (MUDs)? Well, they were the first online roleplaying games, purely text-based, a long time before graphical ones like World of Warcraft or Everquest. A cross between Choose Your Own Adventure novels and Dungeons & Dragons, they mostly involved running around a series of virtual rooms collecting objects, fighting monsters, and racking up points. MOOs, MUXes and MUSHes – named for their code variants – generally took this a step further and required proper characterisation and interaction with other players, which in turn created complex stories with multiple authors.

You start by creating a character. In some games you have to work out their stats (strength and so on), in others such as the ones I preferred, no virtual dice are involved (pure roleplay instead of rollplay). You then let your character loose on the virtual world, which already contains places and people and objects with which to interact. And through your interactions of poses and dialogue – your roleplaying – with other characters, your own develops, creating a history and relationships for itself through the medium of text.

It’s been a while since I’ve done any of this sort of roleplaying. I do miss it, but I’ve grown out of it, of the places and situations. But lately, I’ve been considering how MOOing changed my writing, and these are my conclusions.

1) It sapped all my creativity for a long time. In the eight years before I started MOOing, I’d been dedicated to my paper journals; I’d written a lot of poetry and the occasional short story. I stopped keeping my journal not long after first creating my first online character, and it was years before I wrote any more poetry.

2) It expanded my creativity. As well as being part of an ongoing interactive story which could take new directions at my whim or someone else’s, I was also writing descriptions for rooms and objects, exercising my descriptive and creative powers, my love of words and word forms (especially alliteration), and my ability to take criticism and work in a team. (In fact, MOOing in general gave me a lot of experience in working with other people, including interviewing and leading projects, that’s been invaluable. But isn’t relevant here, since it’s not related to writing.)
Some of my descing experience has lent itself best to poetry; other parts to learning how to pick out the most relevant parts of description to give a full but not overly-detailed impression.

3) It taught me to shun purple prose and clichés. Seeing someone describe their character’s eyes as ‘optics’ made me want to scream and spork my own eyes out. I learnt how to identify what writing styles worked and what made me wince, and I watched other people grow and learn in the same way (sadly not all of them).

4) It taught me to create characters. I fully admit that the first character I ever had was a perfected version of me, but then that made her easy to play. I did run through some of the cliches of characters (particularly the cliches on Pern M*s, where far too many characters have red hair and green eyes and never a freckle in sight), but I learnt to get over them – and when to use them to effect.
In my later years, I did a lot of writing ‘prefabricated characters’ for other people to play, and that taught me how to write believable personalities and histories and relationships, and moreover, how to condense these into a few paragraphs.
It also taught me the value of ‘voice’ – of having your characters each sound different (as well as act and speak differently).

5) It stopped me writing out my character’s thoughts, which I’ve realised particularly with this year’s NaNovel is a bit of a problem. Showing in poses what your character is thinking is a big no-no – you have to be purely factual, and let their opinions and attitudes be read from their words and actions (somewhere that adverbs come in very useful).
But of course, when writing in the third person in a novel, it’s helpful to say what the point-of-view character is thinking, and that’s something that no longer comes naturally to me. I’m getting plenty of practice in it with my current work though, and its multiple PoVs.

6) It made me unafraid to let my characters take over. When you’re creating a story with lots of other characters involved, there are lots of possible directions that things can go, and some of them might not be entirely what you’d planned. Of course, you can plan scenes with the other participants, to work towards a particular outcome, but a lot of the time, it’s just fun to see what transpires through roleplay.
And sometimes, you can learn an awful lot about your character by the way they react to something you hadn’t planned in advance; and sometimes, those reactions can take you off on a whole different path that’s incredibly interesting to follow.

So yes, there are ways in which MOOing – roleplaying in text – has constricted my writing a bit. But what it has taught me has been invaluable in advancing my writing abilities and style, and I can’t ever regret the years it took from my other writing – not least because of all the friends I found through it.

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Exquisite corpse: giving thanks

Posted on Thursday, November 20th, 2008 in poems Tags: ,

Although Thanksgiving in the US isn’t till next Thursday, the last Exquisite Corpse poem in which I took part has been all about giving thanks.

It’s hosted on Champagne Dreams, and it’s called Great is the Morning.

Can you spot my lines without mousing over the links? Hint: they’re a bit long but I couldn’t see any way at the time to shorten them without losing meaning (although now of course I can).

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NaNoWriMo 2008 #7

Posted on Wednesday, November 19th, 2008 in NaNoWriMo Tags:

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

That’s the sound of me passing 40,000 words, five days ahead of schedule. I’m aiming for 50,000 by the end of Sunday, which means a reasonably easy 2,500 words a day for the next four. The usual daily goal is 1,667, but I’ve been writing far beyond that this year, with ease. If only all my writing projects went this well! I need to figure out why writing is so easy for me at the moment; distill it and bottle it and apply it to everything else I work on in the future.

I do have some real blog posts lined up. But I haven’t had time to get them written (no surprise there). There will be a couple coming up in the next few days though, so I don’t bore you all to tears with NaNoWriMo reports.

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