Blogging updates

Posted on Monday, June 23rd, 2008 in waffle Tags:

1) As my new Notices widget currently says, I’m away from today until Saturday 28th. I will hopefully have a couple of posts scheduled, but I might not get a chance to reply to comments, and I definitely won’t get any Entrecards dropped.

2) My left-hand sidebar got corrupted yesterday (boo to WordPress for the first time) and lost all its widgets. I’ve restored as much as I can remember being there, but it probably looks a bit different.

3) I finally got round to redoing my Blogs of Note list, and I trimmed my Authors list too. If you used to be on the Blogs of Note but are one of my frequent commenters, I removed you because you get enough free publicity from this site (I do still appreciate your visits, of course, and think that you have a Blog of Note).

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Sunday Scribblings: Happy Endings

Posted on Sunday, June 22nd, 2008 in Sunday Scribblings Tags:

Happy Endings
A fairytale romance:
girl meets boy (or frog, or beast).
They kiss. Magic happens.
Vows are made, bells ring,
and they live happily ever after.

But ever after doesn’t last for long.
Reality creeps in,
with interfering mother-in-laws
(although those can be sent to a swamp
or pushed into an oven);
crying children and sleepless nights;
the rows and the silences
and the threats of affairs.

If girl and prince can get through
these pieces of normal life
and still love one another as much
as when the bluebirds first sang…
Well, perhaps then they can have a happy ending.

© 2008 C Sharp

[Sunday Scribblings]

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Review: The Gone-Away World by Nick Harkaway

Posted on Friday, June 20th, 2008 in reviews Tags: , , , ,

9 out of 109 out of 10

Take two parts China Miéville to one part early Ben Elton, and blend with a large spoonful of Douglas Adams analogies. Sprinkle with ninjas, pirates and mime-artists, and serve to readers of speculative fiction who have a warped sense of humour.

Nick Harkaway’s debut novel The Gone-Away World is one of the most imaginative and humorous books I’ve come across for quite a while. It’s a novel that takes the big things - love, war, corporate greed, and the end of the world - and blends them with the mundane - apple cake, Tupperware, Ford Focuses (Foci?), and games of pool in a dingy bar - in what is for me a highly successful and entertaining way.

It’s hard to describe this novel without giving away more of the story than I generally like to do. It’s also pretty hard to classify, hence my ‘recipe’ at the start of this review. This is cyber-punk sci-fi fantasy with a dark and twisted sense of humour; it’s an exploration of identity and reality; it has ninjas and pseudo-pirates (and immediately get kudos points from me because of that), and pig-powered electricity generators, and an aged Tupperware-wielding martial artist, and a troupe of mime artists (white makeup and all). And not everything is as clear-cut as you might think it is.

Technical Writing Tuesdays: How to write a How To

Posted on Tuesday, June 17th, 2008 in technical writing Tags: ,
This entry is part 9 of 12 in the series Technical Writing Tuesdays

Technical documents can be loosely divided into two types: the informational and the procedural. Each has its place, but I don’t think it’s an exaggeration to say that a nicely numbered How To procedure can be far more useful for a reader who just wants to know how to get something done and doesn’t necessarily care about the why and wherefore, or what the other buttons might be used for.

Here are my golden rules of writing a How To. Some of these apply generally to technical documents as well!

Introduce your How To.
A procedure should be introduced by something like ‘How to edit a document‘ or ‘To set colour options:
If there is any information that’s essential for the reader to know about the procedure, this should be included either directly before or after the introductory heading. This information could be something as straightforward as a particular mode they need to be in or permissions they need to have, or more importantly, a warning that need to disconnect a device from the mains electricity.

Number your How To.
Using a numbered list indicates to the reader that these are steps which should be followed in a particular order.
Of course, if it doesn’t matter what order the steps are done in, then use bullet points instead. But arranging the How To in a list format makes it easier to follow.

Keep your How To simple.
If you find you’re trying to explain too many varied options in a procedure, with convoluted sub-procedures sneaking in every couple of steps, break the main down into smaller, separate ones. They’re easier to read, and easier to write as well (particularly if you use a tool that can deal with content re-use).

Write actively.
Be decisive about the instructions you’re giving (use the imperative), and write as much as possible in the present tense.
Use sentences such as ‘Click the Big button to open the Little dialog box‘ rather than ‘If you click the Big button, the Little dialog box will open‘.
Try and avoid use of the passive if possible - sometimes it’s ok to use it, of course, when not to do so makes a sentence more complicated than it needs to be.

Write positively.
Tell readers to do things, not to not-do things. For example, use ‘Save your work, then close the application‘ rather than ‘Do not close the application without saving your work‘.

Use consistent terms.
Always refer to bits of the software or hardware by consistent terms. Don’t call something a ‘drop-down list‘ in one part of the procedure and then refer to a similar bit of the user interface as a ‘combo box‘ later on.
Keep your phrasing consistent too. For example, use either ‘From the File menu, select Save‘ or the alternative ‘Select Save from the File menu‘ throughout a procedure; don’t mix them. (That’s helpful if the documents are translated, too!)

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Technical Writing Tuesdays: index of posts

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Time for a revamp #2

Posted on Monday, June 16th, 2008 in waffle Tags:

Wow, I never expected so many comments on my previous revamp post! There were enough suggestions made that I decided to address them in a fresh post rather than just a comment… hence this.

So, in no particular order:

Categories - I like them a lot (dunno to what extent Blogger can do them though; I know I had to go through and categorise all my posts when I migrated to WordPress) and I will duly (and soon) move the categories widget higher up.
For the Technical Writing and Book Reviews categories in particular, I’ve also created separate pages which list the post titles - they’re accessible from that little menu bar just under my title. I’ve come to realise that the text on that is really tiny, and I should definitely make it more obvious in the new template.

Pictures and breaking up the text - I’ve thought many times about adding in more images. I haven’t done it for two reasons; one being the copyright issue on images and the second being the fact that this is a blog about words, after all!
But you’re right: this blog is very text-intensive and I do think it would be a good idea for me to start adding more pictures in though. I do have a couple of (paid-for) CDs of stock photos, so I could start picking through those to see what’s suitable.
However, I definitely will not be putting in adverts to separate out my blog posts. No way. I’m not trying to make money from this blog, so my Amazon affiliate stuff and my little Google adsense is all that I ever want to have in terms of advertising. (I’m not counting Entrecard in that, because it’s more of an extension to my blogroll.)

Blogroll/links - I’m not sure why I don’t like the term blogroll. I suppose it’s because, although I’ve been blogging for about 6 years, it’s something that’s fairly new to my vocabulary and I just think it’s clumsy. WordPress has dropped its use too, in the latest version (2.5) of the software and now just refers to ‘links’.
In addition, I have my links list split into three parts - authors, blogs of note, and general links, and I think I could probably cut down on all three.

Other stuff - no-one mentioned my gi-normous tag cloud! Maybe you all ignore it because it’s too big and skeery, or else you don’t see it because you’re only looking at particular posts - it’s a sensitive little tag cloud, you see, and only shows what’s relevant. I sometimes think it’s way too big and needs to be pruned even just by removing the tags with only one entry. It does show a very good representation of what I read, though! Any thoughts?

Anyway, you’ve all given me plenty to think about, so thank you! I might not get round to redesigning this site as soon as I’d hoped…

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WOOF! (16/06/08)

Posted on Monday, June 16th, 2008 in writing Tags: ,

PlotDog Press runs the WOOF contest - Writers Offering Our Finest - and this week I entered one of my blog posts. As part of the contest, I have to post about it, and I really hope I’m doing it right…

Here are the entries for this week:

About Writing/Grammar
Kimota (Jonathan Crossfield) - “Grammar Wars
Catherine @ Sharp Words - “Do Dreams Influence Your Writing?

Poetry
Jennifer M Scott - “One More Time

Flash Fiction
Jennifer M Scott - “Last Request

Fiction
Francis Scudellari - “Belly: Chapter One

BROUGHT TO YOU BY PLOTDOG PRESS FEATURING: “A Prologue to a Prologue

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